NEA Planning: Feedback on pitch

I received these responses from my peers on an online form which they answered after reading my initial pitch

After this feedback, I will definitely feature dance in my documentary as well as more niche sports such as yoga and Zumba. However, as the feedback on this question were quite varied I will aim to include multiple different sports to interest a wider audience 

As the feedback on this question was an even split between informative and entertaining I will perhaps use two different audiovisuals on the website,  one which is entertaining and another which is more serious.

 

 

This response also shows that a combination of entertainment and serious delivery for the documentary is most popular so I will carefully plan the different tones used in my documentary sequence when I storyboard it.

Everyone who gave me feedback was either likely or somewhat likely to watch a mental health based documentary, I will, therefore, ensure the documentary is anchored by the mental health theme.

I really liked this idea given in my additional comments, I will perhaps use TikTok as a way to make the documentary more accessible for everyone, not just those who are part of a serious sports club. 

I will make sure I can access an upmarket target audience by featuring a wide variety of sports which they are likely to be interested in as well as by using a scientific approach in order to attract a more well-educated audience