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After refleting on my documentary plans and ideas so far I now know for certain some changes I need to make and targets I need to reach.

As a documentary I need to ensure I have 5 key factors:

• an expert
• a subject
• footage of the issue
• opinions
• facts 

•  My expert will be my dad as a sports psychologist
•  My subject will be one of my friends (Hollie) who dances as a rofessional dancer 
•  My footage of the issue will be cutaways often negative aspects of professional sport during my interview 
•  My presenter (Elsie) will explain that she will interview many sports people to investigate the benefits of sport but also the negative aspects of of doing a sport professionally 

 This is a slight change to my initial plan as I am bringing in the negative aspect of professonal sport so that audiences can see a true representation of sport, my presenter will investigate into at what point spot begins to be more of a stresser than for fun I will begin with the scientific positives being explained by Elsie and my sports psychologist, followed by investigations into specific sports. I also need to ensure that I have lots of cutaways to use during interviews such as a dancer getting ready, graphics, etc.